Copy of Paragraph Analysis

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I made a copy of my working draft of my QRG and analyzed all of the paragraphs according to the guidelines from Rules for Writers,

I discovered that most of my paragraphs are not so bad according to my estimation however what I am really lacking is content. I need to find more multimedia sources as well as images and videos and embed them in my QRG. Additionally, I need to work on my clarity by expanding on some topics where I am well acquainted with the issue but where I left some gaps for readers.

Of course there are also some places where I need to work on my paragraph flow which I noted in my analysis. Of particular note is my difficulty with having a good conclusion which I will have to work on.

My Paragraph Analysis can be found here.