Paragraph Analysis 2

In this blog post, I will discuss what I learned from my paragraph analysis of my draft of my rhetorical analysis essay.

Eddy Clio "MCLAREN F1 GTR LONGTAIL" October 5, 2013
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The biggest weakness I learned about my rhetorical analysis is a need for more in-depth analysis. I need to dig deeper instead of simply scratching the surface of rhetorical analysis. I think that overall my analysis was fairly interesting an easy to read as I tend to be good at that as I have a conversational "easy" style in my writing. I think the most important thing for me is to get some really good editing probably from my father and really sit down and dig deep and force myself to spend a lot of time doing some proper analysis of the article. Overall I think I have a good draft but I always lack analytical strength.