Revised Conclusion

In this post I will briefly reflect on my revised conclusion.

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Here is my old conclusion.

Here is my revised conclusion.

I used the circle back method to try to create a conclusion. My old conclusion was certainly a summary of my claims. I am not sure I like the new one better, however. It doesn't feel like it has a proper place in the rhetorical analysis.